Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
Malo e lelei Sariya, thank you for sharing your Haiku poem with us. You have the 5-7-5 done correctly and I think you are describing an eruption. Have a good day.
Kia ora Sariya, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. Haiku can be tricky to write - you have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing? Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Malo e lelei Sariya, thank you for sharing your Haiku poem with us. You have the 5-7-5 done correctly and I think you are describing an eruption. Have a good day.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sariya, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. Haiku can be tricky to write - you have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing?
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
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ReplyDeleteTena Koe Sariya,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Haiku, you have the right amount of syllables. Whats your favourite poem to write?
Blog ya later,
Jasmine